I think that our third draft is a lot better than the previous two drafts. For those drafts, we didn't really have a character representation in mind, which wasn't a good thing, as our teacher was able to identify this. In response to this, we tried to properly form our character as a geeky teenager, through the use of simple clothes and through the use of geeky glasses. I think that with improvements to the character representation, our audience will be able to relate to her more easily.
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