Assignment #9, Draft 2: Documenting Improvements In Drafts.

Genre.

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In draft one, we had conventions of horrors and thrillers.	We've changed this and have less conventions, but all of the conventions we now have are for a thriller film.
We had limited detail about what our genre was and didn't give an in depth explanation for it.	We added additional detail, to explain a thriller in a more suitable, informative way.

Inspirational Films.

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We all had inspirational films, but not all of us specified exactly why a particular scene in a film was inspirational to us.	We added in depth detail to why we found each film inspirational.

Theme and/or Concept.

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We included theme/concept, however, we didn't properly display how we got down to one theme/concept.	We added further information to our brainstorms, but we still failed to properly display how we got down to one theme/concept, and what we did included was quite informal.

Idea Development Option.

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We had bullet points for our entire film and for the opening sequence.	We edited our opening sequence and film idea slightly, and posted these changes on the slides in our second draft.
We originally stated that our opening sequence was a Horror/Thriller.	We changed this and our opening sequence is now classified as just a Thriller.

Storyboard.

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Script.

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Shotlist.

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Conventions Of Our Opening Sequence.

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N/A	We didn't add the conventions that applied to our opening sequence.

Research Of Theme/Topic.

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N/A	We failed to incorporate research to show our understanding of the topic we were filming about.

Locations.

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We had pictures but didn't include a wide enough range of images and the location looked cramped.	We didn't add additional pictures but explained in more depth about the location and the hazards of getting there.